Đề bài
The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.
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Đây là dạng đề Map trong đó cả 2 map đều ở trong quá khứ, nên các bạn lưu ý dùng thì quá khứ đơn hoặc quá khứ hoàn thành để viét nhé.
Dựa trên map được cung cấp, ta có thể thấy:
- Diện tích tổng thể cũng như những đặc điểm tự nhiên như cây cối, cồn cát của Felixstone vẫn giữ nguyên, ngoài ra có 1 khu vực cũng không thay đổi là golf course
- Sự thay đổi: Cơ sở vật chất hoặc thay đổi về mục đích sử dụng
Với đề bài này, chúng ta có thể chia ý cho phần body theo nhiều cách khác nhau:
- Cách 1:
+ Body 1: Chi tiết bản đồ năm 1967
+ Body 2: Chi tiết năm 2001 và nêu sự khác biệt
- Cách 2:
+ Body 1: Mô tả những khu vực có sự thay đổi đáng kể
+ Body 2: Mô tả những khu vực có sự thay đổi ít hoặc không thay đổi
- Cách 3:
+ Body 1: Mô tả khu vực phía tây (golf course, dunes, hotel, café) và sự thay đổi (wind turbines, mở rộng hotel, car park).
+ Body 2: Mô tả khu vực phía đông (High Street, farmland, pier, marina) và sự thay đổi (apartments, private beach, mất pier và fish market).
Nhìn chung, bạn có thể lựa chọn cách phân bổ ý tưởng cho phần thân bài dựa trên những so sánh và phân tích của bản thân nhé.
Dưới đây là 2 sample answers cho đề bài trên, các bạn có thể tham khảo ý tưởng và bố cục bài viết, từ vựng nhé:
The provided maps illustrate the transformations that occurred in Felixstone, UK, between 1967 and 2001, spanning a period of 34 years.
Overall, while the natural landscape, including the golf course and dunes, remained largely unchanged, significant alterations were made to the town's infrastructure. The area previously dedicated to commercial fishing and maritime activities was redeveloped for recreational purposes, while agricultural land was converted to accommodate leisure facilities.
In 1967, the coastal area featured a marina, pier, and fish market. A hotel and café were situated near the marina, with dunes and a line of trees further south. Inland, High Street had shops lining both sides; those to the west bordered a golf course, while those to the east adjoined farmland.
By 2001, the marina, pier, and fish market had been replaced by public and private beaches. A new car park was added near the relocated hotel, and wind turbines were installed south of the dunes. The farmland had been developed, making way for a new hotel complex incorporating a swimming pool and tennis courts. Furthermore, one side of High Street now housed apartments, replacing some of the original shops. The remaining shops continued to operate on the opposite side of the street. The golf course, café, and dunes remained untouched.
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The provided diagrams illustrate the significant changes that occurred in Felixstone, a UK city, between 1967 and 2001. Overall, the city experienced considerable redevelopment, with the addition of several leisure facilities and residential areas, while some commercial structures were removed.
A notable transformation involved the conversion of farmland in the northeast. This area underwent substantial development, resulting in the construction of a swimming pool, a new hotel, and tennis courts. Simultaneously, the fish market, located on the coast, was replaced by a private beach. Further changes along the high street included the conversion of some shops into apartments. In the southwest, four wind turbines were erected near the coast, adjacent to the dunes and the sea.
The coastal area also saw the addition of a new car park, situated near the relocated hotel and existing café, both of which remained. However, the marina and pier, previously located opposite the café, were removed, making way for a public beach. In contrast, the golf course in the northwest of the city remained unaltered throughout this period. The existing hotel was also relocated from its original position near the coast to a location inland, near the new leisure facilities.
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